BC Level 4

Thursday, August 03, 2006

Hello! everybody



Dear all,

My name is Kanokporn Chantarasorn. My nickname is Wi. I was born in Kanchanaburi but now I live in Bangkok. I work here at Royal Crown Imp Exp Company. It's a textiles company. I'm a marketing officer. I am responsible to work with overseas customers. I can speak Thai and a little English. I'm studying English language at British Council. I'm enjoying the course a lot. I'd like to improve my English learning and better my grammar because I must be able to communicate with foreigners and English is one of the most popular languages spoken in many countries. I feel it is quite necessary to contact each other. My hobbies are to play badminton, listen to music and relax with my friends.


Kind regards,


Wi

1 Comments:

At 9:59 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey Wi,
this is a solid introduction piece but I imagine you have written these a thousand times before.

Just a few things
- you are responsible FOR something..

- what do you mean by improve my English learning? do you want to become a better learner?

- "I feel it is quite necessary to contact each other." Says nothing!!!

- my hobbies are PLAYING, LISTENING, RELAXING (becasue you are writing a list of things

hope you find this comment useful and not to critical! Good to see you blogging, keep it up.

regards,

Edward

 

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