Hello! everybody
Dear all,
My name is Kanokporn Chantarasorn. My nickname is Wi. I was born in Kanchanaburi but now I live in Bangkok. I work here at Royal Crown Imp Exp Company. It's a textiles company. I'm a marketing officer. I am responsible to work with overseas customers. I can speak Thai and a little English. I'm studying English language at British Council. I'm enjoying the course a lot. I'd like to improve my English learning and better my grammar because I must be able to communicate with foreigners and English is one of the most popular languages spoken in many countries. I feel it is quite necessary to contact each other. My hobbies are to play badminton, listen to music and relax with my friends.
Kind regards,
Wi
1 Comments:
Hey Wi,
this is a solid introduction piece but I imagine you have written these a thousand times before.
Just a few things
- you are responsible FOR something..
- what do you mean by improve my English learning? do you want to become a better learner?
- "I feel it is quite necessary to contact each other." Says nothing!!!
- my hobbies are PLAYING, LISTENING, RELAXING (becasue you are writing a list of things
hope you find this comment useful and not to critical! Good to see you blogging, keep it up.
regards,
Edward
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